Can some one please comment on my poems it would really be apreciated ive had them on here for so long and none has said anythgin about them
thnx so much

Hey everyone could u plzz comment my new poem called drugs its about someone in my life and i would really appreciate it!

When im with you all i want to do is hold u.I could hug you the whole time im with u and I would be the happiest person at that time because when you hold me everything just goes away ur arms are the only place I feel safe and happy