Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey everyone.... can you please check out my poem "In a cemetery" and comment plz!!! it would so make my day!!! thank you

As the rain falls
from the sky above
there sits a lonely girl
painfully in love
in the plain moon shine
a star swings across the sky
seeing it she wishes
for the hope to live tonight
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Ps. Check out my poems please!!!!

Silently she drowns herself
in other peoples tears
silently she kills herself
because of other peoples fears
everything she does
for everybody else
her hand must have slipped
and she forgot about herself
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PS. check out my poems plz