Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

As the rain falls
from the sky above
there sits a lonely girl
painfully in love
in the plain moon shine
a star swings across the sky
seeing it she wishes
for the hope to live tonight
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Ps. Check out my poems please!!!!

Hey everyone.... can you please check out my poem "In a cemetery" and comment plz!!! it would so make my day!!! thank you

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-

Hey... sorry to burden you all but i would really appreciate some feed-back on my new poems 'Deadly Addiction', 'Her Not-So-Happy Ending', and 'When Time Expires'. all favors will be returned, thanks -Jen-