Chocked expressions, struggling to explain.
Unseen foreign identity, harming insane...

Wisps curl so gently,
as your touches slid...

Hands behind your back,
enchained by that glass...

The love in your lips-press it on mine,
sacramental lullaby. Cry...

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These beads emerge so soft and sweet...

PLEASE comment!!! would really like to improve.
Inadequately, insecurely I remain...

I know its long but please take the time to...
He cloaked my eyes, my realisation. Clasped my...

Inadequately, insecurely I remain
no self-control-can no longer contain...

The acid corrosion, corrupts
Splintered lips, closed shut...

These beads emerge so soft and sweet
Gently trickle down, glisten, gloop...