Hey i'dreally appreciate if people left comments on my new poem, why this happened to me
i'll return the favour.. i just wanna knwo if it is a good as my othr work.. p.s. if u have myspace please leave ur url in a comment... i';; add yuou

Why does it take so long to see to realise, that life is long, the cut is quick, grab a knife, start to cut, feel good, feel sick, stab your self, draag it deep, then it all ends, so say god bye to all your so called friends

I am sitting her, no one to be seen, all alone in the corner, hiding form my reality, it really happened, it was all really there, and it will never go away, it ill never disapeer into thin air.

To sad, cant think, hurt bad, no link, beteewn u and me, forever i'll search for ou key... to unlock a lock that will never be
broken and to say words that will never be spoken...

Today i was happy, for a while not a reality, but in my class, in my arm, i held the one thing that is deer to me

Those days full or sorrw and joy, those days you think about your boy, the days you sit by the telephone, untill you realise
that your all alone

In my room crying, sobbing all day long, listening to the lyrics, of my all time fav song. the words are so meaningfull, so deep
and true, just like the love, the love i have for you..

Standing by the sidewalk, with a quiver in my feet, staring at that guy, that guy i just had to meet

I am tired, sleepy and worn, my heart is used, hurt and torn, but tonight i wish to dream, of such love i have never seen

To long i'v waited for Mr.Right, to many sad days, to many sleepless nights,now i realise my Mr.right, will not come,not tonight