Nothing last forever, forever is a lie...the only thing we have is between hello & goodbye

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Goodbye to the things i thought i knew.
I guess its just better off w/out u.
i cant move on this fast.
i wish i could go back,
to the years that past....

& its that can't eat, can't sleep, reach for the stars, over the fence, world serises kinda feeling....
-it takes two

Dont tell me who to fall in and out of love with...not even i can do that...

I stand there smiling.
Its all just fake.
I watch you with her....
the one that took my place.

I Smile and laugh and try to have fun.
The slow and lonely days keep moving on.
The suffer and pain i try to hide.
The tears that fall i try not to cry.

The tears fall down.
My kness hit the ground.
My head pounds.
I start to scream.
why'd this happen...
all to me?

The smile on my face isnt real.
The feelings im showing, arnt how i feel.
The pain that hurts inside never really ends....
I wish we could go back, to before I said "just friends".

People say we flirt to much, we laugh to much, and have fun to much....
& if thats againts the law...
were rebels!!

*lol.....u know who you are*