Please comment on my poems i would really appreciate it and i will return the favour

The girl you see here isnt me
the girl you see has cuts on her wrists
the girl you see is sad all the time
the girl you see cries herself to sleep
oh wait -- the girl you see is me

The girl you see here isnt me
the girl you see has cuts on her wrists
the girl you see is sad all the time
the girl you see cries herself to sleep
oh wait -- the girl you see is me

Im just a different girl living in an ordinary world.

Mr Blade
You lied
You said you'd make me happy
but its called suicide

Plz check out my new poem Mr Blade
and id really appreciate it if you could comment on it thnxx

Blood dripping on the floor
screams from the front door
mummys angel lays in a pool of blood.

From my new poem "said her last goodbye"
plz read it and comment. tell me what u think

I just want to break down and cry and tell everyone whats wrong.
But i dont, i just put that damn fake smile back on my face and say the words "im fine"

The light shines on that silver blade
and i watch it make my pain fade
i wish i could get away from it all
as i watch it make my red tears fall

She sits in darkness
holding back her tears
She picks up that knife
and confronts her fears
Her world goes black and she hits the ground
crying her ruby red tears

Hey
please comment on my poems and quotes!
i will return the favour
thnxx guys