Hey everybody, i kno u hate it when ppl do this, cuz i hate it when ppl do this but ive never written a poem b4 adn i need some feed back, cuz theses 2 poems are truly from the heart...pls comment on tthese 2 poems...your love... & i feel your love..

Last nite we sat && talked about how we first started dating..i cant believe i would say something that cheesy ...but im sure glad i did

I think back, to when i first met you && all of our long talks on the phone and how my goal in life was to have u hug me.

Nd all ii ver think about is you..&& how bad i just wana lay with my head on ur chest and listen to ur heart beat, nd have u hold me til ii fall asleep

&& its so hard..Never seeing u, being with you, never being in ur arms...&& living with the pain of missing you. ♥

&& ii need u more than ever.. I need u to help me find who i really am..again ♥

She lies in bed crying not able to fall asleep
once again
&& all she can say is,"I'm so in love with himm,yet I'm dying inside"...