I would really appreciate some comments on my poems! I like them, but i'm not sure if they're good. I'll always return the favor

The girl that i am is still in love with who she thought you were...

&& now my pride is all i have,
So with a little shred of dignity i can say walk away and be a man...

I pray,
When it's time for me to say goodbye
I'll never forget looking in your eyes,
I pray,
That I feel your touch
And that God doesn't forget our love,
I pray,
From: I Pray by Amanda Perez

&& even though I've found someone new,not a day goes by that i don't think of you

Hold your family close to you,because in the end,they are far more faithful than even your closest friend.

I saw pair of corona dice today and i thought of you,
I got a knot in my chest - not because i missed you, but because of all the s*** you put me through!

The best friend you could ever have is the one that can give you a huge hug, tell you that it will all be ok, and say that you look beautiful, even tho you've been crying all day. You know they're full of crap, but it helps all the same

What hurts the most is not realizing that it's over, or that things will never be the same, but that he meant the world to you, and to him you were "just another girl"

Tu edes un bunito papi chalu! Te quiro me mexicano!