I would give up my life to just hold you one more time

I listen to you tell everyone about her,
why could'nt that me

I looked in to your eyes looking back at me, o how i wish that moment lasted forver

It would be so much easier if you didn't love her

Do you ever think about me!

Can you please comment my poem 'its you' i'll return the favor. thank you

Can you please comment my poem 'its you' i'll return the favor, thank you

Can you please comment on my poem about broken friendships
'i thought i would never end'
thank you i promise to return to favour
i need to no what you think

Can you please comment on my poem about broken friendships
'i thought i would never end'
thank you i promise to return to favour
i need to no what you think

Please please comment my love poems

i need help thankyou x x x