Hey everyone I know you hate these I do too but I just wrote a bunch of Poems and I would really like some advice on them Will you guys please comment them

I know you guys hate these but will you please comment my poems and give me advice so I can make them better I will return the favor

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I know you guys hate this but will you go comment my new poem it's called "Good bye" thank you so much