Send me some comments on my poem called lost friendship

U gave me a reason to live my life but then u broke my heart

Once your heart is broken there is no way u could pick up the pieces

The day u slipped away was the day i found it won't be the same

Why can't i be the girl the one u talk to all your friends the one the one who puts that pretty smile on your face the want to be with why can't be that girl

There's no one but her and lonely shadow to walk in the rain

In His own little world in his peace of mind he pretends that he didn't break the glass to my heart

U cut me in half lefted me with soaking with tears asking myself what have i done to deserve such pain

She can make anybody this world happy but her own self

There's nothing you could do to this heart of mine you can't fix it so just leave the peices when you go