Will someone check out my new poem "All I Needed"? New, and need feedback. :)

Heyy. comment for comment?

if you give me one, i'll return the favor :)

Guy: i love you.

gal: i love you too.

guy: hugs and kisses.

gal: *mwah*

guy: *mwah* goodnight sweetie.

gal: g'night.

Why is it that when i finally find someone i feel will be good for me, something stops me from continuing anything with that person?

A dozen roses- $32
Dinner for two- $57
Hotel room at the Hilton- $320
The look on his face when she says she's on her period- PRICELESS

New poem: "Tell Me (Maybe)"
Would be awesome if you checked it out, I'll return any favors =]

You of all people should not be asking why i have trust issues. you may not be the person who started them, but you were definitely the fuel that kept them going.

What pisses me off the most, is that you got mad at me when i told the truthe and said that what the others were saying was starting to get to me...when you knew they were right, that you were in the process of using me.

So, what do you two do exactly? draw a name out of a hat, set a money limit then say, "we start now, you know the rules- whoever gets her to go further gets the money"?
i think since you did it to me, i have a right to know how it goes down.

My once.upon.a.time didn't end happily.ever.after