I remember when you told me about your jesus and not look back even if no one believes us(L)

This is from a song - Tonight - Fm static

The way you look at me meake me feel I am a side of you a part of you that isn't dark(L)

(this is a verse from one of my poems)

I would really love if someone could comment on my poems please it would be a BIG HELP THANKS=)

There must be something wrong with my eyes, I can't take them off you.