Can any1 plz read ma new poem called 4 U, i realli just wana see if it is any gud, to keep it on ere or not, i wud appreciate it soo much, thank u
tanz

You May Of Lied, And Hit Me Hard, But Nothing Compares To The Pain, You Put In My Heart

I Cry In My Sleep, Scream When I Wake, My Heart Will Not Mend, All Because The Memory Of You, Will Never End

Life has come crashing down,
Like a Jigsaw Puzzle,
Forever Undone..

~* I suppose it's time to say goodbye,
tears are rolling down my cheeks,
from the farewell I am about to speak *~

~* Tears Flow,
Scars Grow,
Hearts Brake,
Smiles Faked,
Hope Gone,
Friendships Torn,
Happiness Disappeared,
Sadness Feared *~

~* Treasure what you have,
and forget about the rest *~

*Tanie*

Look at me,
I no you will see the real me.
A girl trying helplessly,
to escape and be free.

Got no place to go,
got no one to see,
got nothing left,
all that remains,
whats keeping me sane,
is me.

Kill me now
Kill me quick
Add another slash to my wrist