Ive just written a song .. and i would really appreciate any comments you would have on it.. thanks.

>> Beautifully Mistaken

Dont touch me the way you do, im so sick of being some kind of toy to you.

>> Beautifully Mistaken

Ever felt so [i.n.v.i.s.i.b.l.e], that you wished you would [die], just to see if someone finally notices you were [ever] there..

>> Beautifully Mistaken .. or Forgotten

Not even the sharpest [b.l.a.d.e]
could let out the pain ive held in for [you]..

>> Beautifully Mistaken

My fist is against the [glass],
as the glass *shatters* around me,
each and every piece [falling] apart,
just like the person i see *infront* of me

>> Beautifully Mistaken

[L.i.v.e] For The Rest Of Your Life
*you have to think about it a bit*

>> Beautifully Mistaken

Loving You Is Like [B.r.e.a.t.h.i.n.g].. I Cant Stop

>> Beautifully Mistaken

..starving for perfection

>> Beautifully Mistaken

Your my [e.v.e.r.y.t.h.i.n.g] & im your *nothing*

>> Beautifully Mistaken

I Still Wonder Why I Sit And Cry,
Still Feeling The Sorrow Of Yesterday,
Still Having To Keep Up The Lie,
While Feeling So Empty Inside.