Heyy .. i know this is a real pain but i was wondering if you could tell me what you think of my new poem fare well .. would mean alot thanks =)

.boy; i'll love you for..
*girl cuts him off*
girl; don't say forever
boy; why not?
girl; cause if you say it i might actully belive you..

[&.] when he looks into my eyes, a mini volcano gose off in my heart

[&.] if only you could see how much you mean to me..

.everyone is always trying to define love, but it's undefinable, thats why it's love

.you always say i wear my heart on my selve, and boyy you just stole me sweater

.ii love the rain, it's fun to make out in :)

My knight in shining armor turned out to be a loser in aluminum foil

[&.] she asked him "whats it like to kiss the one you love?" he looked deep into her eyes and said "let me show you"

[&.] it's that can't eat, can't sleep, jump for the moon, over the fence, world series kinda feeling <3