Idyllic Poem

  • Gizmo
    17 years ago

    I really want feed back for this one.

    i wrote the poem the green green grass of Ireland for my boyfriend for valentines day. it took me days to write, and i found it very hard. please woul dyou check it out.

  • Gizmo
    17 years ago

    Anyone?

  • TheRapture03
    17 years ago

    Done. good job btw.

    would you mind r/r/c one of mine. It's called The Ballad of an Angel. thx :-)

  • Gizmo
    17 years ago

    Done. keep them coming peeps

  • Gizmo
    17 years ago

    ?????

  • Gizmo
    17 years ago

    ?????