New Poems- Two For Four- First TEN people only

I have two new poems:
- Dusty Rose
- New Layer of Glue Within Mind
& if you r/r/c those two I'll r/r/c four of yours.
No one or two liners, please, I won't return favor if you leave me that. You get what you give- so if you leave long comment you'll get long and detailed one in return.

COMMENTING BONUS: I'll reward the best 3 comments with:
1st place: 5 free comments
2nd place: 3 free comments
3rd place: 1 free comment

(by the best I mean long, honest and helpful)
Interesting enough? Enjoy :]

Done. nice job, btw

Could you do

Far Far Away
We Never Know
and any other 2 that you'd like

I done with first one and I will r/r/c poems of second one soon.
Anyone else?

Oh yes, The Jack of Hearts, I precisely wrote:-No one or two liners, please, I won't return favor if you leave me that.-
Sorry, but you left a two line comments and as I wrote I won't return the favor.