Exchanging Constructive Criticism

Well how about it? I just finished my first poem that I've wrote in a while and was hoping for some feedback so I know just how rusty I am. The poem is called "Love is for the Birds", but I haven't received anything more then some views so far. So here's the deal, if you leave some feedback on either of my featured poems (preferably my latest) then I will do the same in return and critique a poem of your choice or even two.

Again the poem is:

"Love is for the Birds pt. 1"
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1000606

Thanks, hope to hear from you.

Dead serious not even joking around. Try me! Serious. Seriously. Do it. :)