If your lookinf for intense

Read my latest poem
it's hard to read because of it's message
please read it
and rate
no one liners
it was hard writing it so I'd love long messages
this is a 1for3 thread
thanks

Please!!?

That is incredibly intense. Excellent piece.

Could you please do my latest three;
Dancing With Sharks on Ocean Floors,
Days Plunged in Innocence
Questions Woven Within Silence.

Thank you.

Wow, left ya a comment read it a couple times, left me kinda teary eyed :(

Okay so thank you everyone who commented
umm..sorry but it's like 10:30 and I have school tomorrow so I'll have to get to them tomorrow evening hope that's okay this offer still stands for anyone else who wants some comments.

Done could you please do.
`Cloud Of Tortured Dreams
`My Lost Flower
and
`Bitter like the Rain.

Please vote,
Thanks,
--Elly

I'm getting to all of these right now..
and tomorrow too
anyone else?