Help with song lyrics

Hello!
I am making a triphop/downtempo/electronica kind of solo album and I am here asking for help with lyrics. The album will contain 10 or more songs but there are only seven of them with lyrics. The problem is that I'm Finnish and I don't natively speak English. So is there a native-english speaking person who would like to read-out my lyrics and correct mistakes or perhaps even comment on them? If someone helps me, I will remember him/her in "thanks" and send a copy of the album when it's done in a way or another.

I hope I find one nice person to help me :)

Thx,
- Leo

I wouldn't mind reading them and commenting. music is basicly my life lol!! although im more of a metal/rock fan i shall do my best and even correct some bits if i stumble apone them :P

I don't know finnish....I wanna learn but for now SORRY!