Please give me your opinions

  • candice
    17 years ago

    Your Love Means to Meby Candice

    If I didn't have you where would I be?
    What would I do and what would love really mean to Me?

    Your kiss is like the breath
    Of a million angels on my neck
    And everyday I can't wait for the next one
    To carry me away

    Waking up in your arms is better still
    I hold onto you so tight
    I can't let go
    And in my heart I know I never will

    Everyday that I have your love
    I will never take it for granted
    With it I am never alone
    It is perfect and it is loyal
    And it IS the most precious thing I own

    You without me...where would I be?
    In a world so loveless
    I would surely die
    But you are here...and so I am still alive

  • Normal is the Watchword
    17 years ago

    Too much a cliche...sorry I'm a tough judge and the last line is literally sending out the message, "I need somebody to help me live." as opposed to, "You help me become stronger than I already am."