*****3 for 10*****

  • HidinVictim
    17 years ago

    Ello, please comment any 3 of my first 15 poems under the (more) section and i'll do 10 of yours... please no one liners... and leave names or links please. **i don't leave one liners, and i won't read explicit poems either**

    ***FIRST 10 ONLY!!!!***

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    I will!

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    I just have time for one so please do my latest only.
    "Taking over me; I gladly surrender."
    thanks :]

  • EssenceOfLace
    17 years ago

    Done!
    Please do
    "From the inside looking out"
    and any others that catch your eye.

    thank you.

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    I'm up for it! I'll leave links after I've commented yours.

    Em xXx

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    Ok I've done them, can you do some of my latest ones? You don't have to do 10 though hehe. Thanks =)

    Em xXx

  • A l y s s a
    17 years ago

    Done. Done. Done.

    Please comment:

    "Broken Toy'
    "Liar'
    'My Views On Our World'
    'Knight In Shining Armour'
    "Is Daddy Coming Home'

    and whatever catches your eye!

    Ally. x

  • LoveBird99
    17 years ago

    Done! I loved your poetry.

    I don't really have a comment-preference for mine, I guess whatever catches your eye.

    ~Elizabeth (Lovebird99)

  • Robert
    17 years ago

    Ok if this is still going could you please read thge following and comment and vote plot121

    Two Brothers
    Good Bye
    Unexpected Guest
    Locked Away
    We came Together
    The Window and me
    It's not a crime
    Test or Quest

    thanx again

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    Done. Good poems. Will you please do:

    "The Only One"
    "Dreams of Reality"
    "Shades of Hope"
    "Another Fallen Cry"
    "Starless Song"
    "Golden Miracles"
    "Tained Love"
    "Trapped"
    "Shiny Night"
    "The Morning After The Night Before"

    Thanks in advance!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • Crystal Gaze
    17 years ago

    Done.

    Could you please do...

    `Hold this poem to your heart
    `My 75 minute hell
    `Cry to the moon
    `A cloud of tortured dreams
    `My lost flower
    `Bitter like the rain
    `The hell within my heaven
    `The dawn of love
    and
    `Man and Wife.

    Please keep in mind im not good with formed poetry so my peices are free verse and sometimes follow a story-line. I try not to fence my feelings, and that just how it comes out. So please don't hold the form against me. It would be much appreaciated if you could vote for I did in return.

    Thanks,
    --Elly.

  • Not
    17 years ago

    FINISH* YOUR POEMS ARE SO SWEET!!
    CAN YOU R/R/C MY POEMS

    A Young Womans Prayer
    Waiting
    Trying
    To Be Loved
    The Child
    Poor Little Princess
    Not My Father
    Love
    His Eyes
    Divorced Parents
    *PLEASE AND THANK YOU*

  • she
    17 years ago

    Ive finished,and may i say...wow,ur good!

    please do for,any of my poems u'd like