Plz read this post.. look inside.. urgentttt!!

I just wrote a new poem about a death that happened in our school 2 days ago.. can everyone just read and comment.. rating isnt neccessary.. but its a really sad one.. so if you like sad ones this is for you.. or if you need a good cry.

ill return the favor:).. message me the name of two poems you want commented

Ummm... I post this comment to say that I need your suggestion to improve my poems... so please read my poems and comments/votes them