Yay For A New Titled Contest!

Okay, so, my last contest went well (even though the winners still haven't PM'd me....grrrr)

SO, here are the rules:
1.No cursing in the poem
2.Title of the poem cannot be used without the body of the poem
3.1 poem per poet, so it's fair. I know some people can't or don't want to do 2.
4.Please, no 'im so emo so im gonna take a pair of scissors and slit my wrists' poems. Those tend to blow.
5.However, you can still write sad poems about pain and family life. Just don't be so deathly about it.
7. And don't accuse anyone of stealing your poem or I will kick you out..... I'M SUCH A KIDDER! HAHAHAHA.... no, seriously, I will kick you out.... >=|
8.Ask to reserve the poem first. If you don't, I will seriously not even consider considering your poem and if you do later decide to reserve, you have to write a new poem for that title. So RESERVE! Thank you =)

POEMS:
1. Fragile Joy
~Finalgravedigger
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2.Color Me Blank(FULL)
~I R Jordannn
~Polaroid (DONE)

3.November Rain(FULL)
~Lizaveta (DONE)
~Lonely Romeo

4.Sea Within My Eyes
~suki suki(DONE)
~hidintalent(DONE)

5.The Gambler
~The One Armed Boxer (DONE)
~Newby (DONE)

6.Where The Heart Lies (FULL)
~mRs SuNsHiiNe
~Bryan

7.Sunday Afternoon
~Jade
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8.Whispered Kiss
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9.A Bitter Hello
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10.The Sweetest Good Bye
~AblissfulDREAMER (DONE)
~NyellMoonlight (DONE)

Okay, I haven't decided on prizes but there will be a 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place.

They're all due 11:59pm on March 29th.
I don't care what time zone you're in. I'm in EST but just get it in whenever wherever you live hits 11:59pm. I'm not gonna ask yall to calculate all that =)

The sweetest goodbye!
please and thank you

"Where The Heart Lies" please.

"November rain" please

November rain

It was raining, raining hard.
Wet eyes of the nature.
And my wildly beating heart
With aching little fractures.

It was raining, raining hard.
Days were getting rusty,
Pieces of me were broken apart,
Thunder was so gusty

It was raining, raining hard.
Through the glass of autumn
I was looking at the world around
And felt as if I was at the bottom.

It was raining far too hard.
Breathing with soaked sorrow,
My soul finally started to fight;
Raindrops eased the horror.

It was raining way too hard.
I knew that I had to do it
I knew that giving up
Was worse than the defeat.

It was raining, raining hard,
I broke the glass of autumn
Another fracture on my heart,
Wind just got much colder.

For me it was a rain of life
That monsoon November.
Not behind a glass, I came alive.
Falling raindrops are tender.

*"breaking glass" thing is not about cutting or something, it's all about overcoming difficulties:]

Sweetest Goodbye
by: AblissfulDREAMER

As reality penetrates through longing eyes
The worry filled day gradually approaches
The heartrending time arrives to part ways
Shadowed images roam frantically in mind
Although the pain is piercing and scarring
And endless tears trickle down lovely face
Truth sinks in; time to exchange goodbyes

As I recall the emotions; my heart collapses
You, the radiant glow beaming in my eyes
Now dim shadows erase once loving light
Your smile will live on as blissful memories
Teasing of our potential fairy tale ending
You forever remain the warden of my heart
Although your presence seizes to be near

Glancing at your innocent face; I begin to tremble
The plain hesitation in your eyes reveals chaos
Your hand slowly reaches for mine; I push away
My longing heart yearns to scream for your love
You fretfully cry my name; I unwillingly turn to leave
A lone tear reaches my lips revealing young love lost
Attempting to flee this pain while you solely remain
...my sweetest goodbye; treasured memories

Sunday Afternoon please!

Color me blank please

November Rain please

Where The Heart Lies

Could i have Fragile Joy

Could i have The Gambler?

Could I please have "Sea Within My Eyes"

Sea Within My Eyes

I'm crying,
I'm lying,
I'm all,
I stand denying.

I taint,
Though faint,
My ego,
No restraint.

These tears,
My fears,
I've hidden,
All these years.

A sea,
To drown,
What hurts,
And wears me down.

Lol i changed my name from Sam to the one armed boxer btw =P

The Gambler

He Throws his dice.
Walks the line.
And leaves his mind.
Win or lose.
Just a clink and pull away.

Not an addiction;
More like,
A way of life.

No thrill could kill
Him faster than this.
Twenty grand in debt
Going on thirty,
Adrenalin fuels
His addiction.

His wife says hes a loser.
But to him hes just
Another gambler.

Red 32.
The ball bounces.
In a joyous kind of way.
Black 28.
Red quickly turns to white,
As he loses another bet;
The arc of his fist told us all,
As it slammed down, upon the table.
We watched.
With vague remorse,
As he was carried off.

On the street.
He gambled with his life;
Needle full of smack,
A line of Coke,
Half a bottle later.
Face down.
In a ditch.
Somewhere outside of town.

COLOR ME BLANK

Have you ever dreamt,
of a listless face?
Stone cold, blank.
Unfeeling, immune.

Have you ever dreamt,
of peaceful numbness?
The undying feeling,
of loneliness and peace.

Will that ever occur?
Not not on MY life.
I wish but do not act.
Of that calm soul.

For my world to stop.
For a break from its worst.
So please I beg,
Color me blank.

POLAROID

What is this... ?????

Plenty of spaces left... =)

The Sweetest Goodbye, please :)

The Sweetest Goodbye

I would like to stay like this forever
although my yearnings melt
with each breath, stinging soul.

I would like to stay like this-
satin moments, sweetened flavors,
each day gliding within unawareness-
sleepy mountains and silent dreams
concealed in mind, kept for eternity.

Dancing through the night-
two hearts, denying responsibility;
simple pleasures grab the mind,
merging with inner complexness.

I would like to stay like this forever
although the price's truly too high;
emotions whisper laced ballads.

I would like to stay like this-
melodies caress senses, too close,
each second drips like golden sand-
satisfaction slumbers within chest
lulled with desires, locked inside.

I'll try Sunday Afternoon.

Thanks!

Never mind.

Sunday Afternoon

Why do you hate me
What did I do to you
Never said a bad thing
But your always on cue

You break my heart
You tear me apart
I dread your appearance
Right from the start

Never does it fail
You always take him away
I just surrender in defeat
Why can't he stay?

You only bring one thing
The feeling of longing
Make me miss him so much
And the weeks are prolonging

Because of you
Our time ends to soon
Your not just another day
But a painful Sunday afternoon

"Where The Heart Lies"

You might say that I'm a dreamer,
You might think that I don't care.
You say that I don't love you,
And I think it isn't fair.

Cause my love for you is big,
And I'll love till I die.
Till the sun don't shine no more,
Till the stars don't light the nights.

My love for you is endless,
And it will always be.
And if there's anyone who loves you,
Baby that is me.

You will always be my love,
And that is very true.
A poem made from the heart,
Which is my love for you.

.:CiNdY LoPeZ:.
.:Mar. 15, 2008:.

"Sunday Afternoon", please. =]

Oops, nevermind. Somebody else has already requested it, and there's only 2 spaces.

OMG my computer is being incredibly stupid and I can't edit my first post... =( oh well, just try not to overbook some title until I can get it fixed

Heh...well, my contest ended a while ago but I haven't been in town and I'm busy with my school's play for Phantom of the Opera so yeah...

I'll get it done no later than Wednesday.