Brand Spankin' New. 1 for 2 or 3...

The poem is (currently) called, 'Untitled'
OK, first new poem in several weeks. Please, I need constructive criticism. Make your comments meaningful and I'll be more than happy to look at 2 or 3 of your poems (please leave the names of the poems).

P.S. if you have any suggestions for a title, I'm more than open.

Thanks!

A really nice poem
could you please do "the past, the love, the memories"

Thank you for the comments, will repost to you soon