Are You This Petal?

HI guz and gakz.. I've posted new poem... Im glad if you would r/r/c it... I really neeed a critic now... It's because it has been a a seeral months ago when I stopped writing like this... Hope for your kind consideration... Tnx... By d way I'll return the favor back just tell me what poem.. and the titke of my poems is "Are you this petal?"
tnx again.. tc olweiz =)

Look i read
ok just pick
a poem that
reaches out
to you thanx
again m(O.O)m