Does it deserve a 2.8?

Ok, I made my first EVER love poem, and I actually like it. I'm not a love writer, it doesn't rhyme, but it definetely came from the heart, and I definetely tried to make it as original as possible.
I have recieved two 1's, one 4, and a 5 (as it may seem, or it could've been a little different, but that's my guess)... my question: could you please check it out and leave a comment/vote on your opinion? No, I do not want it to rhyme, I don't want it to seem terribly cliche.

I will return the favour; critism is welcome, and if you want I will comment back with equally contructive critism.

Thanks in advance; I truly appretiate it.

I commented on it and gave it a 5! =]

Shielded love; Fantasy Thoughts
... I think it's something like that... I don't really remember the name.
Thanks stacks for those who commented! I really appretiate it :) I am going to all your work now.

I gave it a 5 I don't know if it helped the rating at all, but I thought that it was deserving of a five, it was probably some idiot who thought that poetry has to rhyme to be good. I thought it was an awesome poem.