Nature poem contest

  • Mark
    16 years ago

    Hello My name is Mark I'm from Denmark, and this is my first contest.

    I would like you to make poems about nature, and how the civilization has it's influence on it, if you understand what I am saying?
    Civilization contra Nature

    it HAS to be A-B-C-B

    there are spots for 20 poems

    1place = 15 r/r/c
    2place = 10 r/r/c
    3place = 5 r/r/c

    1: XxRomancing the Darker SidexX [Done]
    2: Hellon [Done]
    3: Engel Augen [Done]
    4: Paralyzed
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    the contest will close 1.April

    if you have any questions, just send me a message.

    Only 1 poem each...

    - Mark

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    16 years ago

    Unperfect

    A quiet day in the midst of December,
    Oh, where have all the singing birds gone?
    I see them not, I hear them not,
    Their cheery whistles at the break of dawn.

    The snow, such fluffy white elegance,
    Why is beauty now forever soiled?
    By machine driven fast over icy roads,
    Nature's sweet gifts are now uncoiled.

    Rising to sunrise, soon peering outside,
    Why do slushy grey piles of despair abound?
    Cigarette butts, and pieces of garbage,
    Picked up by the wind and tossed all around.

    But how is it that litter gets swept up,
    And carried on by the rivers' sweet drift?
    It is our fault, alone, for we are humans,
    And we are nature's most unperfect gift.

  • Mark
    16 years ago

    (a) see
    (b) nice
    (c) hey
    (b) dice)

    second and last stanza has to rhyme.

  • Mark
    16 years ago

    Let's get this topic up, and hope for new poets to join my competition...

    still got 17 spots left...

  • Mark
    16 years ago

    I'll have to expand the time... need at least 5 people...

  • Paralyzed
    16 years ago

    I will reserve a spot if you are still going with this contest.

  • Paralyzed
    16 years ago

    Nature Fading

    Cement jungles,
    Barren plains,
    Empty forests,
    Pocket gains.

    Dig for oil,
    Hunt for gold,
    Kill for diamonds,
    Nature's sold.

    Rob the earth,
    Dry her womb,
    What won't sell,
    We must consume.

    Hug a tree,
    And say good bye,
    Tomorrow brings,
    A paper sigh.

    Money, books,
    A sign of power,
    Fancy house,
    Fading flower.

    Endless fields,
    Suburban dream,
    Nature's hurting,
    Feel her scream.

    Wrapped up in,
    Our selfish lives,
    Where all else fails,
    And greed survives.

  • Pete
    16 years ago

    I wrote this a while back. Don't know if it quite fits the criteria. Let me know if you want me to remove it.

    Industrial Ailment.

    Ugly wheeled animals
    busy metal bees
    in a perpetual race
    toward tainted destinies

    fluorescent orange glow
    paints a scene so bleak
    angry stampeding juggernauts
    on tarmac smooth and sleek

    Shiny metallic shells
    glaring halogen eyes
    tails pumping fumes
    perfume fills the skies

    skidded blurry footprints
    adorn an immovable stain
    natures industrial illness
    is this blackened moving vein

    ~Pete.