Of Tongue Swollen with Lies.

Wow.
First write for months.
I know, it's rusty, but help me keep my inspiration and tell me what you <really> think.

Rules:
o1. All favors will be returned if you vote and comment.
o2. Leave a title or two for me to return the favor.
o3. I'm really picky about poetry, and a harsh judge; I'll say what I really think. (But not in a mean way.)
o4. Enjoy yourself, and please, no one-liners.
xoxox.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

In Between [The World Beneath Us]
If you haven't read: The Hart's Passion

That was just exquisite.

Here are the two poems I'd like for you to r/r/c, but if you don't feel like doing the second you don't have to.
Blameless
Submission

Thanks in advance!
[feel free to be as honest as you want, the more the better]

I'll check it out. btw love the title its fab. :]

Gobsmacked, at your poetry saying its amazing, is an understatement :D

Done :)

Please comment on: "I Climb, I Slip, I Fall Reaching For Your Hands"

Thanks in advance.

"Gobsmacked, at your poetry saying its amazing, is an understatement :D"
^^^
I'm sorry, I don't think I understand that. =/. Maybe I'm just dumb? The "Gobsmack" part's what confused me. ^.^

Anyways.
Thank you to everyone so far... and for all the nominations! That means sooo much to me, espically since I just started rewriting.

To all you--
I'm going to comment your poems momentarily.

As for everyone else--
Anyone else for this deal? :].

xoxoxox.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Done with that, I really love that one and i nominated it to contest. Hope you'll be lucky!!!

Please check any of these if you have time:
Under The Radar II
I Wanna Have Your Baby
Merciless Heart
Bleeding Love
The Unmatched
The Imperfections
God, I'm Sorry

Thanks in advance

The person above this post--
I'm really busy, but I'll try to do two in time. If I don't, message me and remind me, okay? :].

Everyone else--
You should be finished.

Thank you all SO much so far for all the great comments and nominations. It really makes a girl smile.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Anyone else?
I'm really in the mood to comment.