I'm endlessly searching for a fix

A comment fix that is. Ha Ha Ha, don't you love bad jokes? Anyway, If you comment any of these three:

"Medicated with Moonshine, Looking for that Lunar Eclipse"
"Whiskey My Water"
"Death Led By a Seas**t Seductress"

and leave a sincere comment involving: a detailed critique(where and how it could be improved), a detailed reflection(What you took away from it and how/why does it affect you), or a detailed praise(What you liked and why).

I will leave a 300-500 word critique/reflection/comment on one of your pieces that you can specify below.

If you do all 3, I will praise a comment(if they meet the standards) and do 4 of your poems.

**I will only comment back if you leave a detailed reply to one of the poems. If it's short(less than 6 lines), I will not comment any of your poems.