Please try reading my new poem

I just wrote a poem and I would really enjoy it if you commented about it...thank you I will comment back to you if you do the same for me thank you!
By the way it is called "Not another poem", "corny goodbye kisses" or "discrimination" or any other poem of your choice just give me a private message and I will comment on yours

Doneeeeeeeee

Please rate/comment my poems, too. Off to check out your poems. :D