Failing in Poetry?

  • Michael
    17 years ago

    Hey!

    I know that I haven't been on this site for some time...and I get the feeling that my new poetry (with some exceptions of bringing back old work) is starting to die.

    I don't know if it's me, time, or something else, but it seems like poetry lacks some sort of essence.

    If you have spare time, could you please read some of my earlier poetry to see if I'm failing in my poetry now? If you also want, you could rate and comment on the poetry as well!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Hardly!
    I added you to my favorite authors, matter of fact (and that's hard to do).
    Great poem.

    xox.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

    [and yeah, if you would like to return the favor, i'd be honored, but don't feel pressured to. xox.]

  • Michael
    17 years ago

    Thank you everyone for reading all my poems. I will also read and rate your poems as well as soon as I can!

    More comments on my poetry is still greatly appreciated.

  • Unamed
    17 years ago

    I'll read them
    ***aLy***

  • Michael
    17 years ago

    Sorry about not reading all the poems as quickly as possible, but I'm glad that people are giving me some advice and some nice poetry to read from! Thanks!

    More comments from my poetry is still appreciated!

  • Michael
    17 years ago

    Hey again! I've posted two new poems online. I would like for people to read 'Angel Bones,' and 'Shades of Wings.' Please give your time and your best critiszm! Thank you!