1 for 1 tit for tat!!!

Plz...help me out I just need some advice on my poetry...just give me a private message telling me which poem you read and which one you would like me to read! when you read my poems plz try to read some that not many people have commented on this way I will be able to fix any mistakes i made. If you give me a crappy comment you get a crappy comment. So make it a good comment if you want the same thing back ;)