1 for 1 Real Comments

Did I say comments, I meant true critiques. I don't want any one-liners or "Great Jobs!" , although this is nice to hear at the end when you are saying your done, but please give me some substantial reviews to work with so I may make my poetry better.

Heres how it works:

You critique one of my FEATURED POEMS, and I will return the favor in the same manor on a poem of your choice. Please post the LINKS, it just makes it much quicker.

***I will try my hardest to offer you as much advice as I can in my honest opinion. I will not sugar coat it but I will tell ya if your work is unbelieveable, or quite average =/

=) Let me know which one you did and which one you want. And we'll go from there.

((1 for 1 means for everyone 1 you do I do 1, so 3 for 3, 10 for 10, etc.))

((If your comments are not quality, you should expect that you get the same type of an effort back to yours. Please take the time to improve my artwork, and I will do my best in return.))

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1017173

No problem!

Thank you =p

Hopefully it helped you a little. Not a fan of lyrics =p

Thank you =)

i commented yours back. If anyone wants an Idea of what to expect, check out the two poems I have commented on already

I did "Without You."
Could you please do :

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=978891

`thanks, dear .
..__MiNDYY

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