I need some serious opinions...

  • Lethmelodis
    17 years ago

    I've recently finished my extended narrative poem 'Wonderland' and need some serious opinions on things I could do to improve, or perhaps thoughts on interpretation and the like.

    Im mostly curious as to whether I should continue it, as I have ideas for somewhat of a 'sequel'.

    Here's a link to the introduction:
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1017606

    and finally, the meat:
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=1017025

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    Also, I'm going to try and make compensation comments for those who give me their opinion, kind of as a way of saying "thanks for surviving through this behemoth".

    Thanks in advance.