Quiet On A River Front. [1/1]

I give honest, detailed comments. So, if you don't like honest and/or detailed then don't do the deal.

Title of the poem is in this title.

(And, the deal goes with any other poems, not just this - but this is the one I'd like feedback on right now)

Thanks in advance. (:

Eother of my two latest since I think I'll believe you when you say honest comments just expect the same : )

Right on it. (:

(: Thanks darling.

Anyone else?