Oh, Tired Eyes, Why Can't I Forget

  • Alex D
    17 years ago

    I will trade in-depth reflections/critiques (1 for 1) if you comment my newest "Oh, Tired Eyes, Why Can't I Forget" because it hasn't receive any yet. Thank you in advance.

    Leave a comment here or send me a message with your poem of choice that you would like me to respond to.

    I comment by the rule "You get what you put in."
    If you put in 15 minutes to comment the poem. You will receive a comment of equal value and insight. If you put in two minutes, you will receive a comment of equal value. I will be able to tell :)

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  • BurriedFaceDown
    17 years ago

    Can you either look at my poem

    The Devil's Lover
    or
    A Woman's Lover

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  • MEGZ is wondering what to do about life
    17 years ago

    Either one night of passion
    or the loss of their virginities (my latest poem)

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