One Cold Night In Beijing

I wrote a poem, One Cold Night In Beijing. It tells about me, a young Finnish girl who went to China. My Chinese husband there abused me 2 years. He begin it after out first year of marriage.

I request you to read this poem and comment. I am having a hard time. I try to now deal this past, write out my memories and then try to forget them. I couldn't talk about this for 2 years..

This poem is just a begin...I will write everything out... So then I can move on in my life..

Thank you very much.

One reason for writing is helping people to understand what is like to face these kind of things..Give them some image about real life sitations I have face.

I appreciate every single comment.. I just wish people would speak up how they feel..because I am thinking to tell my parents about this..They have no idea and hearing other's would help me to realize should tell them and how they would feel.

Thank you.