Birthday wish...

My new poem is called birthday wish

it's not great because i'm totaly sick with a cold

today and feel like crap so like idk if it is anygood,

so if u guys would r/r/c then i will read 2 of yours

and r/r/c, ok?

thanks

***aLy***

Wow amazing!

read it and rated it a 5! well done!

if you could please read "broken" and any other one of your choice i would appriciate it =)

Thanx!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Ok done...anyone else?

Haha..lol....it's not great tho...which 2 do u want me to read of urs?