Kristinas ((first)) Contest

Okay guys ((and gals)) so this is my first contest,
so if you have questions..
just ask silly!
OKAY HERE WE GO!
So i have a ton of quotes.. ((some mine, some not))
Go and pick one, and it has to be used in your poem.
I don't care if its a title of it,
if its a line, stanza whatever in it.. just use it.
You can alter it some, but not too much.

R.U.L.E.S
~One quote ((poem))per person
~Tell me what quote you want first.
~Optional rhyming
~Any form/style
~MUST be new

I don't have a due date set yet.. so
GO AT IT
Most of all...
HAVE FUN!!!!
Ask if you have questions..
and
No due date yet.

1st Place-10 comments/rrc
2nd Place-7 comments/rrc
3rd Place-5 comments/rrc
4th place-3 comments/rrc
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D.O.N.E.
Italian Stallion
Beautiful Chaos

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P.A.R.T.I.C.I.P.A.T.I.N.G.
AblissfulDreamer
Paralyzed
Beautiful Chaos
Italian Stallion
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Ok where is the quotes?

For every girl with a broken heart, there's a guy with a glue gun

I want to use that as my title.

thanks :]

Maybe I'm Just Scared To Face The Things That I Feel

8 Billion people in the world...And All I Want is You

When you cry in the rain, no one can see your tears

My Heart Stops A Beat
by Italian Stallion

My heart stops a beat,
Every time our eyes meet.
It's you that I adore,
You're the one that I live for.

Your radiant smile
Your soft tender lips
The happiness glows,
From deep within.

Every day without end,
Every second I live,
That's the promise I'll make
And the chance I'll take.

There's eight billion people
In this ever populating world,
And all I really ask for,
Is the one and only you.

© Copyright 2008 By: Italian Stallion

When You Cry In The Rain, No One Can See Your Tears

A wish it would rain forever,
So you won't see me crying,
A flood embracing this whole world,
So you won't see me dying.

A wish this storm would roll on through,
And sweep us all away,
So pain can't tear my bitter heart,
Anymore today.

I won't run and I can't hide,
Just waiting here for God,
Or something deep and meaningful,
To break this weak facade.

Dripping hearts and bloody words,
Scattered on the floor,
A little hint of deja vu,
I've seen this place before.

Promised love and broken wings,
Of angels that can't fly,
Lost inside the lonely realm,
Of heavens toxic lie.

Where are the quotes I dont see them ne where?

xx

I just wanna be the one you see when you close your eyes

Please ...

You make me smile, even when i feel like flippin off the world

thanks

Never the Same
by Luanne

Waves crashed upon our lives
and swept your love away
broken were all the promises
you vowed to me each day

You opened the gates of betrayal
walked away, leaving me behind
searching for the happiness
you thought you were sure to find

The man I loved with all my heart
broke the dreams we held so dear
walking out the door that day
without shedding a single tear

Trying to walk back into my life
recreate the dreams we once shared
begging for another chance
finding my heart no longer cared

Wasn't long before you realized
can't pour raindrops back into a cloud
gone were the days of love and trust
and the family you held so proud

Time may mend this broken heart
but our love will never be the same
a man who once walked so proud
now holds his head in shame

Shattered my heart, killed my dreams
when you chose to walk out that door
losing trust and changing my feelings
I can't love you the same anymore

I just want to be the one you see
when you close your eyes to sleep
twisting and turning in your empty bed
now drowning in the tears ... you weep

The heart has now finally spoken ...

Im gonna use this one.

When i said
"I'd hit that"
I meant..
"With my car"

Stalker Traffic
By Patrick Murphy

Each morning abides the sun.
as the moon slowly follows,
everytime im sitting outside
the enviroment swallows.

all my thought.
all my emotion.
it is now captured in one breif night.

im just chillin right now.
right inside this light,
a small glisp into my night.

as the last thing i say,
while smoking in a blight
the last thing i meant to say,
was that chick is so fine, alright.

so my friend takes it overboard,
gives her my number.
now i got a stalker lore,
from somone who looks like Steve Hunter.

on this night,
i had a few drinks
my body lored in vodka
and twelve cans of liquid heat.

So the next morning,
i was just so hung over.

SO the next morning
my friend decided to come over.

in a deep breath, i took my repentece
i said these words...
but i can only regret this!

When i said
"I'd hit that"
I meant..
"With my car"

I'm slowly teaching myself how to breath in your presence

I will use this as my title

¨flippin´ off the world¨

By Twisted Angel

You make me smile
Even when i feel like flipping off the world
Theres nothing that makes me happier
Than me being the one thats your girl

You make me smile
Even when I feel like hiding from the world
Theres nothing that makes me more cheerful
I cant wait for our life to unfurl

You make me smile
Even when my day has gone bad
You are the bestest boyfriend
The bestest Ive ever had

cheers
xx

Maybe I'm Just Scared To Face The Things That I Feel

I run,
But hardly far enough,
Never long enough,
Life is always there waiting.

I wait,
Wait to live,
To laugh,
To love.

It must be this fear,
I reek of it,
The stench is overwhelming,
It slowly sickens me.

I writhe,
Full of angst and anticipation,
Shedding this mortal skin,
Bathed in self righteousness.

Humble rumblings of faiths first step,
I will break free from this place,
This prison,
I have caged myself.

Please reserve

"Cry me a river...
i've cried one for you"

thank you!

And I could tell you
His favorite colors green
He loves to argue
Born on the 17th
His sisters beautiful
He has his fathers eyes
And if you asked me if I loved him?
I'd lie

thanks.

I'd Lie

"And I could tell you,
His favorite colors green.
He loves to argue,
Born on the 17th.
His sisters beautiful,
He has his fathers eyes.
And if you asked me if I loved him,
I'd lie."

And I could recite,
The words to his favorite song.
He loves to swim,
Hates to be wrong.
His brother's a loner,
He always has to try.
But if you asked me if I loved him,
I'd lie.

And I could paint,
His smile, tooth by tooth,
He loves to swear,
Hates to tell the truth.
He's got a new girlfriend,
And he always makes her cry,
So when you ask me if I love him,
I'll lie.

And I can't remember,
A day when he wasn't there,
Making me laugh,
When the world didn't even care.
I haven't seen him since fall,
I cherish our last goodbye,
Yet when you ask me if I love him,
I lie.

Most of your quotes are not even yours...they're plaigiarized from taylor swift and others. you need to get those quotes off of there of give their authors some credit. plaigiary is a dishonorable, untolerable act. there are so many great writers out thee....give them some credit or don't take their work.

^ agreed.

i was GOING to enter. then i went though your quotes.

Just because you say "from that song" doesn't mean you're allowed to post them.

Gah. Seriously..