New to poetry

Hey so i am starting poetry i like poetry very much because it can release ur emotions and exactly how u feel.. well this is how i feel about this girl i like feedback/criticism wanted

she drives me crazy
everyday thinking of her
crumbling to the thoughts
the untouchable desire
that i want to touch
to feel that warmth
the rush that runs through my body
like an addict
wanting, needing more
a moment in her presence
feeds my addiction
letting me live for now
like a hallucination,
a dream
with her now
my world complete