My 2 new poems

  • shadowknight
    17 years ago

    Hey!
    id love it if someone could read my 2 new poems

    "Cindersoot, even princesses grow old"

    or

    "My felt saviour *ode to my teddybear*

    Will return the favour!

    Thanks

    ~Shadowknight~

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  • noha
    17 years ago

    Done^_^
    can you do the same for me
    i love you so i will let you go.
    thanks

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  • Melvin LeVeque
    17 years ago

    Ill do a few k =]

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  • shadowknight
    17 years ago

    Thanks guys!!!
    i love getting feedbacl and the only way i get it, is if i beg!!!!!
    I returned the favour and have commented some of yours!!!
    Thanks guys
    your all so cool

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  • PMurphy
    17 years ago

    I will comment in a minute!!!!

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  • Lonely Rider
    17 years ago

    Done...
    please do mine...
    Thanxx

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  • shadowknight
    17 years ago

    Returned the favour to both of you!
    Thanks for your comments.
    they were great!

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  • noha
    17 years ago

    Hi
    i saw that you didnt do mine,maybe you forgot?

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  • shadowknight
    17 years ago

    So sorry!
    i owe you an extra one now!

    Soz

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  • H E Losey
    17 years ago

    Being as the "newer styles" of poetry are hard for me to critique I chose to only do one of the newer ones, the one I felt I had viable comments for.

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