If you are a critic please see this one[1---1]

  • Mister 47
    17 years ago

    I am honest poet , i say my critic honestly

    if you would liek me to critic you , please do one for me i do one for you
    jsut know i do hinest critic and i ask for one too ,
    dont be mad of me if i was hard a bit i say what is my heart
    and mind honeslty
    hehehe

    so let me see !!

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  • Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden
    17 years ago

    Ah ha! Another like me! ^_^ I'd be happy to critique your work honestly. I've sort of earned myself the nickname of the poetry Hitler around here. Read something on my featured list.

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  • Mister 47
    17 years ago

    Ok jenifer , all done thank you for you critic , i hope , you did not mind mine , !!

    :)

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  • Lonely Rider
    17 years ago

    Ok.. done...

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  • Mister 47
    17 years ago

    Ok lonley rider,

    done too , i oved tyour poem
    great rhyhming though

    hehehe

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  • Mister 47
    17 years ago

    Comander , i enjoyed your poem ,

    and i did it ,

    heheh

    i wlecom you anytime , in my commetn word

    :)

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  • Mister 47
    17 years ago

    Anyone else , want to critic me ?

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  • Normal is the Watchword
    17 years ago

    Good luck with this thread.

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  • andhereIstand
    17 years ago

    I love a good critique. so many people just tell what they think you want to hear- please, check out my "Smile and walk away"

    thank you,
    Keleigh

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  • eehcuhhhz
    17 years ago

    Will you do...

    Take Her To Your Heart?

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  • Mister 47
    17 years ago

    Ok i have done yours tasteless

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  • Mister 47
    17 years ago

    ForeverANDalwa ys

    i try to do yours , foreverANDalwa ys
    but their was character not readavble wiatng till you dfix that !

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  • Mister 47
    17 years ago

    Talsteless sorry for misunderstanding i did it again

    :)
    ^_^

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  • Nathanilliam
    17 years ago

    Done. good work, i like them

    could you r/c "death"?

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  • Mister 47
    17 years ago

    Nate B i done yours , i dotn find mine yet !!! you sais done but i dotn ifn dit hope you PM me the name of the poem you did , !!

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  • Mister 47
    17 years ago

    Ok nate be done i got yours thank you !!

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