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Can you please comment on my poem 'Nothing'

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-No one liners
-Be honest, dont tell me its good if you dont really mean it
-Dont request really long poems/sappy love poems

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Hmm.. Just choose any you want to read. Thanks.

Done.
Could you do Twisted Plaything, or I've Got The Moon In My Pocket?
Please and thank you.

Done =]

any of my latest pleaase

thankyou!

K i'll do yours

I would like:
Backwards
Sad 2 say I'll miss you
It's Just a Contribution

Thanks Don't forget to vote! :)

Done...

Please r/r/c mine
Innocent childhood
Nightfall
Alter Ego

thanxxx :)