Simple: You get what you give; [[BrokenREALiTy.

  • BrokenREALiTy
    17 years ago

    I do however many you do for me. (Need me to spell it out for you? One for One, Two for Two; you get the picture, no?) The choices:

    `Lost in This Verse
    `Silence My Lips With Yours
    `The Same Flower That Smiles Today, Tomorrow Will Be Dying
    `Murder Me With Your Love

    -- Leave titles, or specify that you don't care.
    -- I honestly don't care if you vote; I end up voting on your piece either way.
    -- Leave me one-liners, two-liners, three-liners; things that don't help me or if I feel like you didn't read the piece, I will not return your comments. Sorry.
    -- No nature poems, please. They typically bore me. I prefer no cutting; most of the stuff I read's always the same.

    **I realize that some people did the second one already -- but just to let you know, I didn't edit it, so if you've already read it -- it's the exact same thing xD

    Thanks, m'dears.

  • Nix
    17 years ago

    I read two of yours, and enjoyed in your poetry.

    You can comment on:
    -Quotidian Fluxion of Chaos through Mud
    -Eldritch

  • Lonely Rider
    17 years ago

    Done.. did two of yours...

    please do mine..

    'Dawn to dusk' and 'crying in solitude'

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Did one, I'll probably do more later :)

    Please comment on "Spellcaster's Judgment". Thanks in advance.

  • Courageous Dreamer
    17 years ago

    My newest three poems, please.

    I voted and commented all the three you requested.

    Thank You!

  • BrokenREALiTy
    17 years ago

    Okay, done!
    Anybody else?

  • eehcuhhhz
    17 years ago

    Will you do my latest:

    Growth Spurt

    ??

    Please and thank you :]

  • Finalgravedigger
    17 years ago

    Done ^^

    Plz read my latest "The moments"

  • BrokenREALiTy
    17 years ago

    Done, done, done :)
    [I know there were only two poems, but I felt like a third done because it sounds better :D]

    Anyhow,
    Anybody elseee ?

  • Finalgravedigger
    17 years ago

    I read two more of your poems would like it if you read "The brutality within" and "The faceless many"

    YOUR ONE AWSOME POET

  • BrokenREALiTy
    17 years ago

    Haha, thank you :)
    ++ I'm done .

    Anybody elsee ?

  • eehcuhhhz
    17 years ago

    I'll do another one :]

    Will you do...

    My latest

    ?

    It's called:

    Holy War.

    Please and thank you :]