Poetry Game!! itsFUN TRY IT

alright this is my game well not mine but i think its a really great way to create a poem alright i'll write 2-6 lines to start and i want you to add on to it but it has to make sence nothin way off the subject!! okay so here are my lines:

To fight in defence forgotten words of friendly hate
I don't know why a soul deceased a broken hope, a choking breeze
Can't you take me away from your lies?

The lies which haunt my every waking hour,
Surrounding me in darkness and draining all my power.

(OK so this is a really quick effort, hope it sounds right)

Nici.

james thats awesome!!