Memory & tear

  • Hawaiizang3l
    17 years ago

    Im back from a major writers block! but im back wit a new poem ...

    i'll return any comments :D
    mahalo!

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  • Lonely Rider
    17 years ago

    Done...

    'running back to you' and 'Mars the red planet'

    thanxxx

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  • Courageous Dreamer
    17 years ago

    I didn't mean to critize your poem so much. But, I hope my suggestions are helpful. :]

    Done.

    Any of mine. Please.
    Thank yOu.

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