Title contest

Any type of poem is accepted.
The due date is June 30th.
No acceptions.
Only 2 people to a title.
One title per person

Titles:

What lies within the heart
*Teria Leeann
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Behind his/her smile
*Ninja Girl
*xPinkDizzyTeacupx

The art of perfection
*Hid*
*Beyond Repair

Beauty beneath the surface
*kennY
*Engel Auger

What lies within the truth
*NoniWang
*Novalyn Grace RRL

Masked perfection
*its all over*
*

Tears of frozen ice
*Naughty Rotten Rhymer*
*Suicidal temptation

Happiness in a bottle
*Decay In The Dark
*

blooming love
*
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Secrets left untold
*a phine to sour skittles
*Spoken Silence

REWARDS:
1rst) I will comment&&review 9 of your poems
2nd) I will comment&&review 5 of your poems
3rd) I will comment&&review 3 of your poems

All winners will be added to my favorite authors
and will be mentioned in my profile section and highly recommended for all to view&&comment there poems.

The first place winner I will also select one of there poems (or if they have a prefrence) to mention in my profile section for everyone else to comment&&review.

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You can edit your post but if you want your thread deleted only a mod can do it.

Masked perfection

please

Behind his smile, please

Could i please reserve

"Behind his/her smile" ?? :)

thanks!

I'll reserve
" what lies within the heart"

thanks.

What lies within the heart.

Pillar of the night; so bold, so beautiful -
forgiven with the right and dreams to with-hold.

Teams that fight the battles lying within our heart -
given time to heal the wounds from the very start.

Charming words of wisdom and tears of such sorrow,
as we sit and wait another day for the next tomorrow.

No time can hold the meaning of the life we are given,
yet, the soul reversing your own can't choose the risen.

Fractions of the mini-minds clearly aren't enough,
to hold the batteries charged once upon a time ago.

Irresistible lusts of the selfish brain take the focus over,
and we seem to love few moments, such as those, that last.

Sure thing there are times where our dreams seem to exist,
but in reality they fade away into another dark abyss.

And, the pillar of the night; so bold, so beautiful -
forgiven with the right and dreams to with-hold.

We can't fend for ourselves nor hold up our own end,
instead we dream of life where all is forgiven.

What lies within the heart is nothing but a tale
since fractions of the mini-minds always tend to dwell.

Please Reserve What Lies Within the Truth

*Happiness in a bottle*

Thank you. ^_^

Please reserve 'What Lies Within The Truth' =J

"Beauty Beneath the Surface" Please

Title: Beauty Beneath the Surface
Writer: Kenny

Worn-out clothe hanging along
Her exhausted fragile shoulders
Chilling to death from violent songs
And fatal words like broad boulders

At every extravagant feast downtown
As she rejoice with the unbeaten rodents
Imparting left-over foods & her very own frown
A stranger of her world, valuing every
single cent

She's not as mellifluous as the royal dames
With sapphire lockets, ivory milky complexion
Not as stunning as queens with priceless fame
With elegantly admiring posture's erection

But within the depth of her vivid eyes
A lovable beauty of million princesses lies
A sweetheart veiling itself in perfect disguise
Beneath the outer surface, a beauty that
never dies. .
. . . goodness

The Art of Perfection

The art of perfection
To deter the suspicion
To even prevent suggestion
That she may be unhappy
The thought wouldn't cross there minds
Not for a second of time cause she's an artist
A master at her craft
And a victim of her past
But her art is self harm
Not to raise any alarms
But I really see her and she hates me for it
I tried to help but she chose to ignore it
So for now, I'll watch the stalled car on the train tracks
There's no light at the end of the tunnel, so try and relax.

By: BeyondRepair aka Zach

Secrets left untold please =)

What Lies Within the Truth

A secret kept is a secret death-
Mourning for papers never found.
It is the lock upon the door that tests
Whether truth is truth at all.

I see pillars of ancient man
Rising toward the gods for light
As if the light could shatter all
And conquer the Devil's eager plight.

But no, I have reached for truth
Only to find it more hideous and vile
Than the darkest night set forth by hate;
A veil thin yet strong enough for bait.

Within the Shangri-la, heaven or whatever it may be
A shadow hovers above hungry for blood,
The people beneath are more cursed than others
For they have found fool's Gold or False Truth.

They hide this fake gold beneath their lives
Cherishing it, worshiping it, loving it-
For it shows them only what they want shown
And not their decline into a spiraling pit.

That's what lies beneath the emblem of truth,
A web of lies concealed through the ages
That stains the next generations again and again
And melts the godliness off Bible pages.

What Lies Within The Truth. (Quatern)
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We find what lies within the truth,
On tattered paper; scripted words.
Tired consonants go oft unheard,
While vowels tend to hold their youth.

Between the lines of new and old,
We find what lies within the truth.
Mine eyes unstopping, begin sleuth;
Their secret thoughts: ours to unfold.

Between the picket-fence like lines,
as pages bend: scent of vermouth,
we find what lies within the truth.
And slowly, crack it's weary spine.

Word's loving touch on skin does soothe.
These pages act as old soul's shroud.
And only in linguistic crowd,
We find what lies within the truth.

(c) Novalyn Grace RRL 6.22.08

*A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fourth line of stanza four. A Quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme.*

[:

I'm in for this.

"Secrets left untold"

Please!

Secrets Left Unfold

Secrets unfold
Secrets untold
Forever in doubt
Of what the past had to hold

Young love, Broken hearts
Too stubborn to admit, Feelings withheld
Long deprived of a future they strive
Lost a chance of what it might have been like
Now gone, And we will never why

Secrets unfold
Secrets untold
Forever searching
For what the present holds

Moving on, Starting new
Still always thinking about you
It would've been nice, Would've been true
Could've been happy instead of feeling blue
But yet again will never tell you how much I love you

Secrets unfold
Secrets untold
Forever in wait
For what the future will hold

Deep love, Never forgotten
Will live always in the core
Days will pass, Times will change
But young hearts will remain the same
Unaware of what will come next
But holding faith and anticipating the best

Behold love, this will never be told
Secrets won't unfold
And I'll keep seeking your heart of gold

What lies within the heart

thanx)

What lies within the heart

- Hello, this is your life speaking.
I was just wondering, why
You, who are always seeking
For perfection in your life,

You, who are always trying
To surely do your best
You, who try to look shining
And always know what to do next,

You, who look so successful
And happy about who you are,
Who can endure every stressful
Situation in your life,

Tell me why you are now sitting
In this empty room, alone in dark,
And desperately you are weeping
Though everything seems ok in your life?

Tell me why, and where are you going
Without a thought, without an aim?
All the thoroughness you are destroying
And making all the days seem the same

Tell me, what you feel is missing?
For I don't know what's going on.
What else are you now seeking
Here, in the darkness and alone?

Why is it so that you don't know what
Lies very deep within the heart?
I really hope that I could help you,
But I have no idea how.

- Okay, life, thank you so much for calling.
I really need to straighten things out
I feel like now I am going
Through a strange phase of my life.

When everything that I'm used to is changing
Feels like I'm empty and I'm lost
And all the changes I am facing
Gather in me, feels my life is frost.

-What can I do to help you, sweetie?
- No, I just need to carry on.
Though now there is no beacon to lead me,
I'll find my way just by my own.

Mask of Perfection

Her spirit surrounds us
the glow of her heart
no lack in her smile
no tears to be seen

freedom she brings
pure love she gives
her soft skin, her brown eyes
like an angel walking the earth

this pretty little girl
with her golden hair
staring at people
while building a lair

a place for a creature
a beast from hell
waiting for the perfect time
to brake out of it's shell

two different persons
lies withing her big brown eyes
we can only count the days
before one of them dies...

I'm sorry I'm late..if you don't want to accept my entry I understand.

Behind His Smile

So foolishly blind, never wanted to see
Now naivety has only left me with misery
Living in denial, unaware of countless games
Declaring that they will, but things never change

Here we go again, once more we're on repeat
Clearly for you, lying is such an easy feat
Once again falling so easily into your arms
Again fooled me with your snake like charm

Heart lonely, crying out; head all over the place
Strange combination-love mixed with distaste
Be better of alone, but can't live without you
What happened to love that we used to value?

Know way deep down yet don't want to admit
No matter how much I love you, you can't commit
Found a new best friend, goes by the name Denial
You're hiding your lies behind your {honest} smile